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Green, the color of pain,
Like the color of my vain,
Showing the line of life,
which I can cut with a knife.

Blue, the color of rage,
Like my hands after a rampage,
Showing the internal bleeding,
Having the pain leading.

White, the color of depression,
Like my soul, full of aggression,
Showing what I am inside,
No escape, nowhere to hide.

Orange, the color of madness,
Like what I see when I am fearless,
Showing the heart of the fire,
You burn down and I go higher.

Black, the color of peace,
Like when you finally feel bliss,
Letting emotions go away,
Closing your eyes, at the end of the day.
I find societies standards for colors wrong and obsolete.
This is what I see when considering these specific colors.
You may agree, you may not, I don't really mind.
Each person see's colors in a different way.

Enjoy.  
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StrandedTal Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
"Having the pain leading,"
Getting everyone gone dreading,
Your life disappears next blinking,
The screen's line stops beating.
 
Liked your line, so I felt like writing this. Sorry ^^"
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Delta565 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I can't really see why you're sorry, but I'm glad you liked it.
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Meme2Mimi Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014
I like your take on the colours used, especially black.
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zorbama Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
A very unique description for each color, and very nice rhyming. I like it!
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Delta565 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
I despise the "Conventional" description of color, since I just don't see at as correct.
On the other hand, we're all human, so who knows what's correct and what's not.
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demi-lune4 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Student Filmographer
This is amasing! I've never seen those colors that way before o.o
To me,
Green is life, like the trees and grass.
Blue is peace, like everytime I'm near water.
Orange is stunning power, like fire. It's a color I can look at for hours.
White is light, but sometimes I just can't support it and this is when
Black tend to be my world, because it's the color on wich I get lunatic thr most, and it's at night that my mind works the most.

Now that I look at it, my personnal view looks kinda lik every generic view from society... But you know, I can't really blame it, I sort of grew around nature and all... So... Yeah....... ....

...hue.
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Delta565 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
As I've said before, everyone has their own perspective. XD
I like yours, it's much more calm then mine. :3
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demi-lune4 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Student Filmographer
:iconawwwwwplz:
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