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Leave me alone!
Is that so hard to do?!
You don’t care about my feelings,
They are nothing to you!

What have I done wrong?
I just want you to leave,
You hurt me more and more,
So how can I believe?

Your words mean nothing,
Your apologies are fake,
Just stay away from me!
How much pain can I take?!

You got what you wanted,
But what about me?
I only want one thing,
I want to be free!

I can’t take it anymore!
Every night and day,
You just refuse to leave,
So at least stay away!
Some people just don't want to leave.
This is based on my friend's story, not mine.
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adrianarosabell Featured By Owner May 25, 2014
cool poem and it's true some people sometimes want to help you but instead they hurt you and you tell them you want to be lone and they don't go.
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Delta565 Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
And it goes either of two ways:
We don't have enough courage or we'll feel bad if we tell them to go away,
Or we tell them to go away and they stay. 

That's what this poem was made for. To just show it to those people.
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adrianarosabell Featured By Owner May 26, 2014
yeah, I hope your poem taught that to those people, they sure can get annoying sometimes thinking they're right 
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GreenGoblin73 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yes.
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Delta565 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yes.
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DeannasurusREX Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013
I feel this way about a lot of people.
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demi-lune4 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I was singing your poem while I was reading it.
My voice was like crap, but your text is beautiful! :iconthefeelsplz:
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Delta565 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I can understand, I like singing my poetry even though I sound like a dead raven.

Glad you liked it. XD
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Eredev Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013
I got no clue why it took me so long to get here... :confused: I must have gotten lost on the road...

Anyway... here I am :D Got nothing smart to say but I like it :D
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Delta565 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm guessing I'm missing a pun here but I'll just reply politely and say thank while acting like I understood the pun.

Haha, yeah, I get it, thank you anyway. ^^
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